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how to create a strong helpful comment

Hi bloggers , yesterday  we created a template on how we can create a strong helpful comment . First we  created a padlet to give us some ideas on what to say . Then we copied the template and filled it  in with some ideas . We used 4 different headstarters which were
Positive
Helpful
Thoughtful
and
Question
At the end we had to ask a question, like what shape they used ? . When we finished we designed a comment using some of our  ideas.
Blog you later 😁


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