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Improving my blog comments

By Anonymous

Hi, bloggers today in Cybersmart, we have been working on improving our blog comments. The first thing we had to do was write a blog comment to a buddy( mine was Clara). Then we chosse one of their recent blog post's and commented on that . We had to use the three main parts of a good comment Helpful, Thoughtful and postive. Then we had to copy or take a screenshot of the comment we made and add onto a google drawing that we were using. After that we had to read through the instructions and make changes to our comments. The changes I made to mine comment was, I changed some of the words into more interesting words and also add some information on what we did in the A-Z alphbet emotions activity. Next we had to check it with a buddy and then the teacher. If the teacher said it was good, we had to take a screenshot of it and post on our blog. After that we had to explain what we did. Here is my drawing.




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