Improving my blog comments

Hi, bloggers today in Cybersmart, we have been working on improving our blog comments. The first thing we had to do was write a blog comment to a buddy( mine was Clara). Then we chosse one of their recent blog post's and commented on that . We had to use the three main parts of a good comment Helpful, Thoughtful and postive. Then we had to copy or take a screenshot of the comment we made and add onto a google drawing that we were using. After that we had to read through the instructions and make changes to our comments. The changes I made to mine comment was, I changed some of the words into more interesting words and also add some information on what we did in the A-Z alphbet emotions activity. Next we had to check it with a buddy and then the teacher. If the teacher said it was good, we had to take a screenshot of it and post on our blog. After that we had to explain what we did. Here is my drawing.

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Summer learning (week 1/ Day 1)

Today's activity for the summer learning journey is finding out three top facts about New Zealand on the Tourism New Zealand site. My first facts about New Zealand is, New Zealand is part of the pacific rim of fire and it's most active volcano is Mount Ruapehu , which is found in the middle of the North Island . Did you know that? The Auckland sky tower is the tallest freestanding structure in the southern hemisphere, standing at 328 meters high. Last fact about New Zealand that I found interesting was 30% of the country is forest. So there must be a lot of trees then. CAN YOU FIND OUT SOME INTERESTING FACTS ABOUT NEW ZEALAND? LEAVE A COMMENT ON WHAT YOU FOUND OUT BLOG YOU LATER

ABOUT JAPAN Summer learning Journey( Practice)

Hi bloggers, today i'm going to tell you some quick facts about Japan. One reason why I picked Japan is because my dad is from Japan. Another reason is because I am doing this country for the Cultural Toolkits, with my friend Amaya. Japan is located in the Pacific ocean and is made up from 6852 islands. The four largest islands are Honshu, Hokkaido, Kyushu and Shikoku. Japan is located to the East of Korea, Russia and China. The population in Japan is 127.1 million people. Did you know that Tokyo is the capital of Japan? There national icons are A Cherry Blossom tree, The Koi Fish, The Red Crowned Crane(Bird) and The Lychee Fruit. The lychee Fruit The Red Crowned The Korean Blog you later

Summer learning journey

Morena bloggers, Today in Literacy tumble we are doing something called the Summer Learning Journey. We had to pick a country and, I picked Australia. The two reasons why I picked Australia is because one my favorite netball player is married to an Australian rugby player and, two because I wanted to find out about Australia so I can tell my aunt, who lives in Australia. Who wants to find out about Australia? Lets Go.... In Australia the capital is Canberra, there are many other places like Brisbane, Melbourne and Sydney. In Australia they have a holiday called Australia Day, which is on the 26th of January. On Australian day they eat things like Pavlova and also chips down at the beach. The national colours are Green and gold and they usually have a Kangaroo on their sports uniform.

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