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Writing tumble

By Anonymous

Malo e lelei bloggers, in the last couple of weeks we have been doing a writing tumble, where we had to write about a picture in a moment in time. After that we could pick a picture and write about in any style of writing. Either another Moment In Time, Creative writing or a poem. Our goal in those couple of weeks, was we had to at least finish two pieces of writing. We also had the choice of which piece of writing we wanted to start on. My teacher Mr R gave us some good information, which was pick one that you like and one that you don't like. My favorite piece of writing in a moment in time was The Rocky Slippery Slide. The Creepy Stalker was my least favorite because I didn't really find the picture interesting. The style of writing I choose was creative writing. The pictures I picked was a dunger computer and an email logo. When I was finished my writing on the computer picture, I sent my work to my friend Zoe to read over it. The feedback she gave was "I really enjoyed it can you make a part two please?" So now I am writing part two. If you would like to read part two leave a comment, also leave a comment on what story you liked the most. BLOG YOU LATER✌✌

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Location: Waikowhai primary school

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